literature

Cigarettes

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My New Orleans muse smiles;
Bourbon Street quick-grin.

Mona Lisa Lolita; she splashes
through the stained-glass
of oil-slick puddles
wearing combat boots dark
as a Halloween new moon.

Her machine-gun lips are
half-drawn around dusk.
Cherry-red smile,
shimmering green jade eyes.
She can see through the clouds
if she casts them herself.

Dragon mouth against paper;
the serenade of the skeleton.
She burns stripped phalanges,
swears she's sucking down
Christmas.

Red wool, a bonfire;
she breathes all the warmth
she has never known.

Lungs of the phoenix,
blistering black;
breath full of gray ash.

One day she will wake hacking,
spitting poison spiders.
Tonight she inhales summer;
mouthful of fireflies.

She tilts her head back,
cat eyes triumphant.
She'll never be a constellation,
but she's stolen Orion's left foot.
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