Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×

:iconwinterkate: More from winterkate


More from deviantART



Details

Submitted on
November 23, 2012
File Size
425 bytes
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
664
Favourites
31 (who?)
Comments
36
×
+++
i am the wicked edge of ricochet,
the asphyxiation of dust
in a hummingbird's bones. skeleton,
i am silver, grass torn hollow
by a child's breath. corkscrewing,
my veins etch true reflections
on time's skin:

a cardigan crumpled
like a child. Blue
and torn in half.
---
Formatting and imagery play, yay!
Inspired by Flo Rida, because I'm kidnapping Top 50 song titles.

UPDATE (oooh I feel special!)
[link]

A link! A link! Mystery!
Add a Comment:
 
:iconsi1ver-reborn:
Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Writer
Excellent imagery good job! :)
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :)
Reply
:iconsi1ver-reborn:
Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Writer
ur welcome!
Reply
:iconscatteredwords:
scatteredwords Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
skeleton,
i am silver, grass torn hollow
by a child's breath.


Love that.
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :)
Reply
:iconrandomlyinspired-21:
randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
a cardigan crumpled
like a child. Blue
and torn in half. :,,>

I always love what you write; it's so elegant in its simplest way
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so very much :)
Reply
:icondamagedhomewrecker:
DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i really love how this reads, and all the imagery is breath taking
Reply
:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so very much :)
Reply
:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hi. :wave: I'm a reader for #Elocutionists and I read this out loud. I'd love to put it up on our blog ([link]), if that's alright with you. You can listen to my reading here: [link] :heart:

Let me know if you like it. <3 I loved reading it.
Reply
Add a Comment: