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All The Poets Come To Life by flummo

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i am the wicked edge of ricochet,
the asphyxiation of dust
in a hummingbird's bones. skeleton,
i am silver, grass torn hollow
by a child's breath. corkscrewing,
my veins etch true reflections
on time's skin:

a cardigan crumpled
like a child. Blue
and torn in half.
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Formatting and imagery play, yay!
Inspired by Flo Rida, because I'm kidnapping Top 50 song titles.

UPDATE (oooh I feel special!)
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A link! A link! Mystery!
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Writer
Excellent imagery good job! :)
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :)
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Si1VeR-ReBoRn Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013   Writer
ur welcome!
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
skeleton,
i am silver, grass torn hollow
by a child's breath.


Love that.
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much :)
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randomlyinspired-21 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Writer
a cardigan crumpled
like a child. Blue
and torn in half. :,,>

I always love what you write; it's so elegant in its simplest way
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so very much :)
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i really love how this reads, and all the imagery is breath taking
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winterkate Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so very much :)
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hi. :wave: I'm a reader for #Elocutionists and I read this out loud. I'd love to put it up on our blog ([link]), if that's alright with you. You can listen to my reading here: [link] :heart:

Let me know if you like it. <3 I loved reading it.
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