Just another blackout poem. Tell me if you like it!
God you really have a talent for this!
Pretty good, friend
I'm in love with that concept of just taking some words of a whole page. How did you have that idea ?
Actually, it's not originally my idea. I would love to say that it was, but erasure poetry has been around for a while. Google Austin Kleon; he's currently the forerunner in the movement.
Like it? This gave me chills.
This is a really cool idea, I'll have to try this
this makes me want to try this.
this is amazing.
this is amazing.
Thank you so much! Actually....you gave me an idea stick around, and check my page soon!
Me likes. Including the messy lines.... if they were too neat, it would take away from the immediacy and authenticity for me.
Thanks! I still probably will experiment with other forms, but....not in this book, I don't think. Wonderland is going to stay wonderfully inexact
I really like the poem itself, but I think the messiness of the blackout takes away from it a bit. I think if it was neater, like if you highlighted each blacked out word more solidly it would come off much more powerfully.
Thank you! I will remember that in future versions for sure!
Wow, this is really cool. I've never seen something like this done before, so bravo!
Thanks! It's called blackout or erasure poetry, and it's actually really cool
Yeah, it took me a minute to actually figure it out. At first I was like "Whaaaaat????" , but then I was like "Awww yeah." Lol, sorry, I'm trying to start using more deviantART emoticons to be more expressive in my journals and comments.
Hey, no problem! The icons really are fun -- plus, you can use the ones on the sides too -->
Yup! I like that you used "Noble" because... Well... Kind of obsessed with fiction medieval.
No problem! What're your favorite books/fics?