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Owning It by winterkate Owning It by winterkate
Just another blackout poem. Tell me if you like it! :)
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seanfhocal Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
God you really have a talent for this!
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :)
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Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty good, friend :)
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winterkate Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
Gracias, mi amiga!
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Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
De nada
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Milreis Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012   General Artist
I'm in love with that concept of just taking some words of a whole page. How did you have that idea ?
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winterkate Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Student Writer
Actually, it's not originally my idea. I would love to say that it was, but erasure poetry has been around for a while. Google Austin Kleon; he's currently the forerunner in the movement.
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Milreis Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012   General Artist
I looked at his work, it seems to be very inventive and interesting. Thanks a lot for that great discover ! :icongreengrinplz:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Student Writer
Haha, you're so very welcome! No problem :)
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cheezstickluv Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
Like it? This gave me chills.
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! :D
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Sweetpea1960 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
This is a really cool idea, I'll have to try this
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome! Grab a book, grab a pen, let's start something new!
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pseudovanity Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012
this makes me want to try this. :hug:
this is amazing.
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Actually....you gave me an idea ;) stick around, and check my page soon!
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pseudovanity Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
what is it? :eager:
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Student Writer
Search #BlackoutSunrise in Groups ;) you're invited, by the way.
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pseudovanity Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
will do! thanks! :heart: :hug:
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:iconwinterkate:
winterkate Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Writer
You are really welcome!
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tonepainter Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me likes. Including the messy lines.... if they were too neat, it would take away from the immediacy and authenticity for me.
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! I still probably will experiment with other forms, but....not in this book, I don't think. Wonderland is going to stay wonderfully inexact :)
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InAWorldOfScones Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
I really like the poem itself, but I think the messiness of the blackout takes away from it a bit. I think if it was neater, like if you highlighted each blacked out word more solidly it would come off much more powerfully.
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you! I will remember that in future versions for sure! :)
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InAWorldOfScones Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012
Awesome, good luck!
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is really cool. I've never seen something like this done before, so bravo! :clap:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks! It's called blackout or erasure poetry, and it's actually really cool :)
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it took me a minute to actually figure it out. At first I was like "Whaaaaat????" :confused: , but then I was like "Awww yeah." :nod: Lol, sorry, I'm trying to start using more deviantART emoticons to be more expressive in my journals and comments.
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Writer
Hey, no problem! The icons really are fun -- plus, you can use the ones on the sides too -->
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yup! I like that you used "Noble" because... Well... Kind of obsessed with fiction medieval. :blushes:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Student Writer
No problem! What're your favorite books/fics?
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Fyres-Descent Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like The Iron Fey series by Julie Kagawa and the Divergent trilogy by Veronica Roth. If you haven't read them, I really recommend, they're all great books. :3
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winterkate Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Student Writer
I have read the Divergent books (love 'em!) but not yet the Iron Fey series... I'll have to look into them :)
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